tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post5514993902969182550..comments2022-11-20T02:01:17.063-08:00Comments on The Wit and Wisdom of Another Sarah: Ides of March! - Middle Reader love scene blogfestJust Another Sarahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07589166715361819941noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-55491631623276869822010-03-17T20:32:49.493-07:002010-03-17T20:32:49.493-07:00Poor Dustin. Wonder if he'll tell the parents...Poor Dustin. Wonder if he'll tell the parents? This was very good. :)Melanie Shermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01385073936714563295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-82305281948019512332010-03-16T18:43:56.675-07:002010-03-16T18:43:56.675-07:00Great build up but I feel bad for the poor kid. Th...Great build up but I feel bad for the poor kid. That has got to be traumatizing! I wish I'd gotten to this one last night, but that was when I heard of the fest so I had to particpate first. <br />It's really cute, definetly PG MG, I really want to hug Dustin, that just sucks. And the last line was really powerful.Hayley Lovellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16786674202167099600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-69702751796592654452010-03-16T17:57:57.728-07:002010-03-16T17:57:57.728-07:00Thanks, guys! Sorry I haven't replied to all o...Thanks, guys! Sorry I haven't replied to all of you individually...but I really appreciate all the feedback!!Just Another Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07589166715361819941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-41676866890176184992010-03-16T16:46:26.614-07:002010-03-16T16:46:26.614-07:00Very powerful.Very powerful.Laura Canonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16574566234310522696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-84202442318804146072010-03-15T19:57:12.085-07:002010-03-15T19:57:12.085-07:00Really nice job. All of your characters came to li...Really nice job. All of your characters came to life on the page. I really felt for Dustin and his confusion about his feelings. Along with the rest, loved the last line.LK Griffiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05520319424741799928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-56548230962790990622010-03-15T17:16:47.463-07:002010-03-15T17:16:47.463-07:00Nicely done :-) and awesome ending!Nicely done :-) and awesome ending!Sara {Rhapsody and Chaos}https://www.blogger.com/profile/09824996048264979275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-65664385264814135462010-03-15T16:01:16.065-07:002010-03-15T16:01:16.065-07:00Cute scene! I didn't even attempt to write one...Cute scene! I didn't even attempt to write one -- I think toning it down must be really difficult. I don't write MG or YA, and I have a whole bunch of respect for those of you who do.Leigh Hutchens Burchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13974935740527936303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-19858395645064972572010-03-15T15:09:17.291-07:002010-03-15T15:09:17.291-07:00I liked this alot, but, poor Dustin. I really feel...I liked this alot, but, poor Dustin. I really feel for him here.sarahjayne smythehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589820347348973092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-43007846376602327372010-03-15T13:43:12.882-07:002010-03-15T13:43:12.882-07:00This is starting to seem like a pretty good work-a...This is starting to seem like a pretty good work-around for this challenge :D<br /><br />Well done. I love your description of Erica. She's very clear in my head.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17034419617457525778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-28413802899829276242010-03-15T13:18:02.992-07:002010-03-15T13:18:02.992-07:00Wow, that last line was killer!! Great job, reall...Wow, that last line was killer!! Great job, really really nice.Anne Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05816355522284492131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-26038377255923470162010-03-15T11:49:17.806-07:002010-03-15T11:49:17.806-07:00I agree, well done and very thoughtful. The last l...I agree, well done and very thoughtful. The last line really got me.Portiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13435815819572442582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-79244437989697053732010-03-15T10:57:00.753-07:002010-03-15T10:57:00.753-07:00Very nice! You really get a sense of all three cha...Very nice! You really get a sense of all three characters. Well done you!Shannon Messengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08003607156860716462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-5544343144406401182010-03-15T09:23:45.932-07:002010-03-15T09:23:45.932-07:00Awesome work, Sarah! It didn't occur to me to ...Awesome work, Sarah! It didn't occur to me to come at the PG blogfest from this direction. Well done!Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-27854614406298125712010-03-15T08:59:45.772-07:002010-03-15T08:59:45.772-07:00culatirvery good!
I love the description of her....culatirvery good! <br /><br />I love the description of her. All tart & sass. Wonderful!<br /><br />So glad to have discovered your blog through all this!<br /><br /><a href="http://princesscourtneysbarr.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Visit My Kingdom Anytime</a>Courtney Barr - The Southern Princesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14455508477182984039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-19037310128188649402010-03-15T08:15:24.659-07:002010-03-15T08:15:24.659-07:00Awww, poor kid...Awww, poor kid...Livia Blackburnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15805379309049803903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-68321136567906787802010-03-15T01:40:49.466-07:002010-03-15T01:40:49.466-07:00I liked this; the build up, the desire, the feelin...I liked this; the build up, the desire, the feelings of loss. <br /><br />This was very good; and really captured what I expect of MG/PG.<br /><br />...........dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.com