tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post6296131072784360026..comments2022-11-20T02:01:17.063-08:00Comments on The Wit and Wisdom of Another Sarah: Body Language blogfestJust Another Sarahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07589166715361819941noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-67399600324484575472010-04-30T17:48:00.097-07:002010-04-30T17:48:00.097-07:00Don't forget Lilah's LAST LINES BLOGFEST....Don't forget Lilah's LAST LINES BLOGFEST. I look forward to reading your entry. I had to post early due to work. Breeze by and see what you think, RolandRoland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-1481864091276221382010-04-25T19:16:02.074-07:002010-04-25T19:16:02.074-07:00Well, I was going to comment on the use of dialog ...Well, I was going to comment on the use of dialog (hee hee) but instead I became obsessed by him walking away from Amy. What? Go back! Go back to Amy. Sigh.Melanie Shermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01385073936714563295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-14342367792056519402010-04-25T11:34:47.571-07:002010-04-25T11:34:47.571-07:00Great job! This was a hard challenge but you did a...Great job! This was a hard challenge but you did a great job with here so it's okay with the dialogue at the end. :) I agree with Amalia about Ty marrying Lana but really in love with Amy! You gave that picture very clearly!Anastasia V. Pergakishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03350626962513824401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-33192734032171481722010-04-25T03:37:43.083-07:002010-04-25T03:37:43.083-07:00I so wish I was flexible enough to cross my arms b...I so wish I was flexible enough to cross my arms behind my back and grip my elbows.<br /><br /> - EricEric W. Tranthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13842968931062056407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-57517921473569112472010-04-24T18:07:47.198-07:002010-04-24T18:07:47.198-07:00This was so hard, wasn't it! I thought you did...This was so hard, wasn't it! I thought you did a great job so the dialogue in the second half didn't bother me. :)Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-10349411486787235132010-04-24T13:20:55.483-07:002010-04-24T13:20:55.483-07:00Lots of good body language. I could feel the awkwa...Lots of good body language. I could feel the awkwarkness. I saw some dialogue, though. lol ;)Katiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06851403823244758904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-58851352926352357922010-04-24T12:37:57.237-07:002010-04-24T12:37:57.237-07:00Don't go..I wanted him to choose Amy. She obvi...Don't go..I wanted him to choose Amy. She obviously does it for him. Oh man. Great job.Raquel Byrneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-12535559159864677642010-04-24T12:01:17.635-07:002010-04-24T12:01:17.635-07:00Very well done! I liked the part where you said &...Very well done! I liked the part where you said "she was issuing a challenge." I'd be interested to read more, especially to see if they ever get the chance to have a real conversation (you know, the kind with dialogue). :)Amy Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05083333388180804799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-63567858221711638732010-04-24T10:36:10.185-07:002010-04-24T10:36:10.185-07:00I like the challenge issued part. Gives the charac...I like the challenge issued part. Gives the character a fun attitude and works well with the no dialogue challenge of the blogfest.Dawn Embershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-36835557741359904792010-04-24T09:35:50.243-07:002010-04-24T09:35:50.243-07:00Ah, forbidden love. That just tears a person apar...Ah, forbidden love. That just tears a person apart.<br /><br />Nicely done Sarah.<br /><br />..........dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-1914067684783688572010-04-24T09:13:33.312-07:002010-04-24T09:13:33.312-07:00The body language is definitely there. But then so...The body language is definitely there. But then so is dialogue. You sneaked it in. Clever you.<br /><br />Come check out my body language entry, why don't ya? Have a great weekend, RolandRoland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-57772523172409757332010-04-24T08:42:44.622-07:002010-04-24T08:42:44.622-07:00Dialog! Noooooo!!
But the part up to the dialog w...Dialog! Noooooo!!<br /><br />But the part up to the dialog wasn't bad. I really get a good sense of who Amy is. Nice job!Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5546962975269867428.post-6021431025657177062010-04-24T07:06:07.814-07:002010-04-24T07:06:07.814-07:00Oh man. I feel like Amy is the real love of his li...Oh man. I feel like Amy is the real love of his life and he's marrying Lana like a FOOL, thinking he would never see her again. I love Amy though. That scene is really cute! Hooray, Sarah!Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.com